Puzzle - Comments

Oh, that was intense. It was creepy and weird and, I LOVED it. Lol great job.

Thanks guys. Oh and I will edit the chapters to keep the characters talking in different paragraphs. I wasn't sure which one looked better.

Your story is incredible. It's really, really interesting and I really like it. One thing to make it better though is that whenever a new person talks, there should be a new paragraph. Like in the second chapter there was an entire conversation there that was in one paragraph when it should have been seperated. Other than that, your story was perfect.

This story is amazing. I saw it on the Stories list and figured it looked interesting so I had to come and check it out. I just read all three chapters in like ten minutes. I can't wait to see the next update you've got for it and I'm surprised no one has commented this; it's amazing.