What's up with Johnny? Why does he deserve to be jealous? XD Great update. This Jared character is interesting...is he good is he bad? Hmmm, the story continues.....
Okay, I've only read the prologue so far, but you can bet that I'll come back and read more once I find a little more time. So far, I love it. I've seen ideas similar to this, and they usually wind up being amazing. You've put a bit of a spin on it, though, so I'm ready to see how it all turns out. I really like this. (:
Oh yay another Johnny story! This is lovely, please keep it up! The relationship between Johnny and Melina is very very interesting, his concern is unseen by her and her secrets. Good stuff! ^_^
AWE, that's adorable. Kisses always make the owies go away. I love the more Johnny love. More soon? P.S. If this was the surprise, you got me, you got me good. I died. LOL