I Found Myself Falling...Not For the Right Thing Either - Comments

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Check up on your grammar :\ But the story is very interesting! I will finish reading it another time and I hope you enjoy writing it. Comment Swap got me here.

I couldn't stop reading, it was insanely good. New subscriber, and I can't wait for more. (:

Awww :) Can't wait for more :)

@ mkhlaxgrl13
Why thank you. :)

amazing!!!

@ loINve
Thanks for leaving a comment. Glad you like the story. Well he was being lied to, but yet he was kind of doing the same thing... so let's see what'll happen.

Oh my goodness...you are a fabulous writer and I LOVE this story! I wish that Jake wouldn't have reacted the way he did, but I guess he has a right to be mad that Craig and Rae didn't tell him. I can't wait to for the next update!!

I remember reading this story on Quizilla! xD

:O they got caught!!!! Update soon!!

Busted! Thanks for posting!

omg update soon!

I can't wait for the next update! I want to know how her brother reacts when he finds out they're dating XD Plus I want Jake and Katie to officially date too

yaaay update again!

I've only read the first few chapters. I like the concept, I havent read a falling in love with my brother's best friend kind of story in a long time. I'll have to get back to it later, however. The way you write is getting somewhere, but your too detailed. I understand its hard to get the right amount of detail because hey, everyone on mibba has trouble :) but, tone down the detail to what is really important.

I dont know about anyone else, but when I'm writing myself or reading someone elses stories, dialogue and what comes after it really has to be spot on. Or my brain goes crazy. A lot of the time you will write that someone else is speaking but you put the main character's actions after it. It really confuses the reader because they assume at first it was the main character; in this case Rae. I thought most of the time it was Rae talking because you'd put her actions afterwards. But, I figured it out eventually. A tip is to maybe either add more detail right there about what they're doing when the person is talking or make the other person's action a seperate paragraph.

Other than that, I enjoyed it and will come to finish. :)

This was pretty good! The summary was a little too long formy liking and I think it would do better as a prologue, but that's okay. I was a little confused by the first of ch1. By reading her priblems with make up and everything I was expecting a younger girl, so I was really thrown off when you said 'first day of senior year' because she seems a little immature. Also, I found your descriptions to be almost too much. I like a lot of descriptions, but there's a point where too many get in the way of the avctual story. Also, the brands in the first chapter were distracting. I don't need to know where she bought everything. It's kind of irrelvant and males my attention leave the actual story. Other than that, it has a good plot and relateable characters. Keep up the good work!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this!!!!!!! *Subscribed* More soon PLEASE!!!!!

veryy cute! finally the feelings come out

Love this story, update soon :)