Where'd you go? - Comments

Okay... It's not. I phrased it wrong.. Still, pretty much the same thing, though, I am going to change it now.

O_o;
Yes I did..
"I never thought it would turn out like this."
That is one of your options, dear.

suicide is a touchy subject for many,

the only thing id say is change the first sentence so that you dont get points taken off(you didnt pick one of my options)

thanks

Thank you so much...
Suicide is a touchy subject for me, as well, seeing as I've lost a few people to it. It's so hard to lose someone like that....

Also, I really appreciate your comment.. I'm feeling quite... insecure about my Drabbles and I'm wondering if they're any good so this means a lot to me.

This made me shed tears; it was so sad and full of grief. It made me cry because I lost my best mate to suicide when I was fourteen, though he took all of his sleeping medication.

Suicide is a touchy subject for a lot of people, like me, but I think you were able to write about this nicely. It didn’t feel awkward while I read it. You’re choice of words could have been a bit better but I still like this.

This really makes me wonder what kind of a person this Lisa was, you know. What could have been so bad to make her do this? What was she feeling?

I’ve read through this a few times because it’s that good. No matter how sad, it’s good.