To Find Perfection in My Pride - Comments

so he's still being a dumbass, i see.
Aiden needs to get some sense knocked into him.
he's going to end up in the hospital before that happens.
anywaaaaay, update soon, por favor.

I'm going to work on The Irony, just for you!! ;D

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I still love this :)

You have a typo in about the second paragraph. You said that he ran his hand through his brush or something, and I'm pretty certain you mean hair :)

This was kind of cute, aha. :)
Really cute.<3

Okay. I am under the impression that an update should be coming soon to tell us WTF is going to happen now.
Jersey needs to go fuck a chicken, the jackass.
And that chicken better not be Aiden, 'cause he needs to grow a pair and get away from his jealous dickhead of a boyfriend.
Anyway, please, please, please, don't leave us hanging for so long!
I love this :)

oh hell no! fuck what i said before!
i REALLY don't like Jersey now! that stupid fuck...
how dare he hit sweet little Aiden?!
but he's stupid for leaving Kimber's...i would have stayed with her.
i know you guys are going to make everything better, though :D
...at least, you better! ;D

update soon? :] ♥

I still like this!

Jersey is definitely...still a jerk, yup. I hate that boy...man...person. He's less of a man than I am if he hit Aiden for flirting! And that's saying something, because I may be tomboy but I ain't male :)

So, I love this story, and I can't wait to see Jersey get served what he deserves! *smack whap crunch pow!*
Haha :)

I really like this! The character's are really vivid without being over the top =]
definitely subscribing!
more soon please?

It was still good! I don't care if it was a little late or 'crappy', I think it was good.

Jersey is a jerk, a giant jerk! (Sorry. Quest for Camelot reference XD)

Love it. Lovelovelove it!

justin is a sweetie :] i like him already.
aiden is adorable, plain and simple.
who's next to have coffee spilled on?
haha just kidding ;D

update soon? :] ♥

Ooh, I'm glad you mentioned this was up already :)
It's great! I really like your characters (characters like Kimber usually annoy me a bit but you've fleshed her out really nicely so she's got more depth and seems more real and I actually quite like her :) ) and I like how you're showing us the two sides of Jersey's personality because, again, it makes him more realistic.
Oh, and I like how you've split Justin and Aiden's perspectives between you- it adds to their characters and the way that you're alternating between them works really nicely because it's helping to build up their story.
You're both doing a great job :) *subscribes*
xxx

Great new chapter! I love Aiden - he's so hyper and adorable and I want my own little gay friend like that =33

Wait, I might have one almost the same..except he's not quite that hyper. lol.

So, I love it! Until next time!

Oooh la la. Lol XP

Like I said, Slash isn't usually my thing but I'll read it for you. And so far, it's pretty good. I must agree there were parts that made me laugh, as well. ^_^

So...Kimber, eh?

As in the very same Kimber that Aiden knows...? Hmmm?? (wink, wink, nudge, nudge)

Love it so far. Can't wait for more XD

aw, major fail ^^ i forgot to put the / before the i >.<

p.s. i'm going to suggest this story to people when i update my stories ;3

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“You’re making walking through here extremely awkward for everyone else. Clinging to my back like a monkey and giving me a hickey. Making my buddy say hi.” and so many other parts made me laugh ;3
i love this already :D so duh, i'm going to subscribe!
i can't believe this doesn't have any comments yet o.o

update soon? :D

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