Little Memories - Comments

Found you through a rec of someone else... omfg mate. I started reading on Sunday and havent been able to stop!!! Have rec'd the story so i can find you and it again haha xx

Super story, like all three parts, ah-maz-ing! Had me glued for days.

How could you do that?!!??! How could you do that to your characters, after all that they've been through?! After how hard they fought to stay together, through Voldemort and death and torture! I refuse to fucking cry. I won't. This is unbelievable. I stayed up til 5 am, spending HOURS on this story all day, just to come to a shitty ending. Isn't there enough tragedy in real life without bringing it into this world as well? Should true love really be crushed and broken down, until they are mere memories? Is that all it's worth?

Hahah, that last line I could BARELY picture coming from Severus Snape, in ch 56. Hopeful. Oh dear. It's almost cute

I hope with all my heart that Theo doesn't really fall for her. Being smart enough not to but enjoying the physical attention from a gorgeous friend is truly perfect. Almost too perfect.

I understand that he's still an immature teenage boy, but from a previous man who promised to marry Charlotte, he's a complete piece of shit and deserved to be raped by Voldemort. At least once. Fucking scumbag.

45- Melody's in Ravenclaw? You said she was sorted into Hufflepuff

YOU WROTE IT'S BETTER IF YOU DO?!?!!? No WONDER something about you was so familiar!!!

It's really stupid of the people not to realize that not only are Death Eaters allowed in the school, they teach it as well. How daft are they? And it's very veryy interesting that Charlotte has gone from emotionless killer, strong death eater to an insecure school girl again, and I say that in the most affectionate way possible.

Some errors, namely this in 27.

His eyes managed to drift over to Charlotte and he did a double take when he noticed his displeased expression.

I try not to nitpick too much, but this did throw me off and I had to re-read it.

Scabior is pretty awesome <3 What is his real name though?!

Ahaha what a stereotype!

“No, of course not,” he said, sounding as honest as a Slytherin honestly could.

Oh, and it's ridiculous that Narcissa didn't know a spell to untangle Charlotte's hair. They have magic, for heaven's sake. No way in hell.

Well, I'm certainly relieved that Charlotte still has her emotions. Draco...well, he doesn't deserve to lose her, which is a lot coming from me, as I nearly always side with the female. He is stupid though.

Chapter 9- OK, what the fuck is going on? In Charlotte's note to Draco, she explicitly wrote that she gave the locket to Harry Potter and she would probably die for it. He already knew. So that the heck?!

you made me cry.
this story made me cry.
:(
but it was so wonderful.
it's like a reece cup: so much pb and chocolate its just overwhelming amazingness!

So. Fucking. Good. Ugh :( I will admit it, I cried. I feel like the Harry Potter series has ended for me, yet again, and I will probably be moping for the rest of the day. But this is one of the two best stories that I have read on mibba, ever. Possibly the best anywhere. Now excuse me while I go check out your other stories <3

xoxo Caitlin

This comment hereby negates the comment above the above comment, and states that the ending was indeed worth it, the story would have been boring without said drama, and that yes indeed, you are a fabulous writer who should some day be published. Or now.

That is all.

Ps- Your an amazing author

I really upset because your a great writer but you made this story filled with so much unnecessary drama then instead of finally letting them be happy at the end you ended it with the most miserable ending for the two of them wow sorry but that make me mad. Your a really good writer though. But the ending wasn't worth it.