The Masquerade Mask - Comments

I think this was pretty sweet, I really liked it.

Yup, and about the grammar and stuff,

*Matt wasn't ease-dropping* it´s eavesdropping

and

*if the lighting had been brighter and she could have saw his eyes and face better.*
that would be she could have seen his eyes and....

Just a little help :)

*Sorry for all the time it took me, my internet just started failing on me =(

Hmmm.
Well, to start off I don't really like A7X fics -- I'm just not big on the band.
But I have to say, this was rather well-written. You had several spelling mistakes and run-on sentences, but nothing too bad. I wish there had been more emotion, or that you had drawn it out a little more. Also, I think you needed to use more conjunctions -- your dialogue sounds very formal in places.
Overall, it was good, but could use some editing and revising.

This was sweet :) I really liked it because even though it was a little predictable it was written well. The only thing is I wish there was a little more emotion. Some parts seemed a little bare, like you could've gone into more detail but didn't. Overall I really liked this though.

Oh, I like this. Especially the random way she found out who Matt was, and the fairytale-ish ending...I'm a sucker for those :P
I love that she wasn't the..typical princess heroine too. I'm sick of those.

That was so cute.
I'm still smiling. Violet was very gutsy at the end when she just went for that kiss.
Wish I could meet and fall in love with Matt at a masquerade ball.

I'm definitely loving it so far.
I loved how she found out it was Matt by watching tv like without even trying to figure out who he was and he was just there.
Wicked banner, by the way.