Our Footprints Washed Away From the Docks Downtown - Comments

  • RiverStyx

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    i love it and haha unless ones named stephanie and i dont no it hilarious they fucked up the name
    September 18th, 2010 at 10:51am
  • tiffany danielle

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    The whole time I was reading this I was kind of bugged that it didn't have a pretty made-up layout haha. That's half the fun of clicking on a story on Mibbs woman. Seeing yet another personalized and specificed piece of creativity to accompany the words.<3 It's part of the equation! :)

    But other than that, I kind of liked this. It was flowy and had nice detail. I didn't really notice any grammar or spelling mistakes so that was a really nice touch. C:

    I'm with Fly, however, I don't like the cliffhangers. D; </3

    More please? :)
    September 10th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • Abbi-Girl Ellen

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    ahh,
    the still don't remeber
    jerk faces =(
    September 8th, 2010 at 07:11pm
  • SynfulxColors

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    Ahhhh/! hahahahahah!
    Poor girls.
    Stupid Boys! D:
    September 7th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Abbi-Girl Ellen

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    this story I like
    the cliffhanger...not so much
    i need morrrre
    September 6th, 2010 at 11:24pm