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  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    Rofl. I really like :) Can't wait for more :)
    August 30th, 2012 at 08:00am
  • factory girl

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    so i think i have avoided every reading a twlight fan fiction until this point and i actually did read the entire thing. uuummm one thing that got me was the frist couple chapters she is really anti- forks and her family and then suddenly she gets along with everyone (including her brother) and its like her personality does a sudden 180 without any explanation. just something to think about to keep your story consistent :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 11:54am
  • Trisha-ValoX69

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    As a general rule, I avoid Twilight fanfiction, but comment swap has sent me this story so I tried my hardest to get into it. There are a few things you should fix, like the small errors in your grammar and changes in tenses.
    July 11th, 2012 at 07:39am
  • MyButterfly0001

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    i like it. i cant wait to see what her reaction is to the whole wolves and imprint thing with Paul. plz update soon. :)
    July 26th, 2011 at 03:40am
  • XoXHaysXoX

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    Update soon?
    I like your story!
    New subscriber!
    July 1st, 2011 at 07:16pm
  • Tiger10121

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    I love lexi's character!! It was too funny but i love the story itself so pleeeeeeease update! I wanna see her take out the "fatties" XD
    June 16th, 2011 at 09:30am
  • two sided heart

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    I really really like your stories and I want to read your Jacob and quil ones but I don't know there names pleSe update soon
    June 10th, 2011 at 12:58pm
  • SoccergirlBianca

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    i really like this story and i hope you update soon
    December 27th, 2010 at 04:17am
  • jadebutterfly95

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    yay!! update!!
    i feel important :)
    December 24th, 2010 at 04:57am
  • Kristalynnxx

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    Love this story!! Cant wait to see where it goes!!
    update again soon!! :)
    December 24th, 2010 at 04:14am
  • strawberryshortcake

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    WRITE MOREEEE
    December 24th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • jadebutterfly95

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    hope this inspires you to write more! i like it
    December 23rd, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • xMy Heart Is A Fistx

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    Hahahah this story made me laugh many times! Love it!! x>
    November 16th, 2010 at 06:40am
  • emmared FMT!

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    LOVE IT!!!!!!! Please update soon!
    October 21st, 2010 at 01:16am
  • xXxD3ADxXx

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    ouu, what did Embry tell Paul? I don't think he would give up this easy! I hope there's a catch or a loop hole!! xD
    October 17th, 2010 at 01:46am
  • VampLover15e

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    OMG! I LOVE Paul!!!! :D I'm liking this so far. Haha, Embry was just like, 'WTF??!?!?!?!?' :D i like it :D :D :D
    October 16th, 2010 at 06:04am
  • Ashlee Nicole

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    I don't mind swearing at all it is an everyday thing for me so yeah I didn't really think about it like that. It would've been hilarious. and thank you for commenting and subscribing. I'm working on the next chapter I will probably have it up sometime this weekend.
    October 14th, 2010 at 02:12pm
  • xXxD3ADxXx

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    *comments and subscribes*

    just a side note; I really like the story! But at the end of chapter three it would've been hilarious if you added in Embry's P.O.V too, it just being
    ...FUCK!

    xD sorry if you don't like swearing or anything, but I just thought it would've been funny.
    October 14th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • Tubbz07

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    Wow it's really great... Thankss for commenting on my story by the way.... Can't wait to see what happens next =]
    October 6th, 2010 at 09:16am
  • Ashlee Nicole

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    Thank you for commenting on my other two stories nobody ever commented on them so I just kinda stopped writing them I had no inspiration to continue. So thank you so very much for doing so I'm going to start the new chapter and hopefully have it out sometime this week.
    October 4th, 2010 at 07:19am