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  • UsedToBeCute

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    Eeek! So cute! I kinda wish u continued it... (hint hint wink wink)
    November 21st, 2011 at 10:21am
  • vani11alatte

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    Wow just read this whole story, really bored, but I totally loved it
    January 30th, 2011 at 07:22am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Hey, it was cute :)
    I sometimes like the cliches and the corny endings. Haha :)
    January 26th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • PenguinATTACK

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    This is pretty good. it's cute too (:
    I love how she didn't follow the stereotypes
    January 25th, 2011 at 05:24pm
  • Yoghurt Mamogkat

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    no ending is good actually. it was kind of new which makes it cute, the scene where she mouthed 'no'. mostly, in stories, girls would be shocked and just totally get paralyzed when that happens. but here, she just said no, which makes it cool. its a sweet and fast ending.
    January 25th, 2011 at 03:14pm
  • im fluent in sarcasm

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    Please please please please update soon I think I'm dying I read all you've update so far at one time and I really want to know what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE!!!! Love your story btw...
    January 20th, 2011 at 08:04am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    o.O
    Whoa.
    An L-bomb!!!
    Now I'm very, very eager to see where this goes :)
    December 19th, 2010 at 01:39am
  • SNiiPER

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    I couldn't help but notice some spelling mistakes and bits of text speech, do try to keep it formal.
    December 19th, 2010 at 12:25am
  • izzylizzy95

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    It's pathetic how excited I get over an update lol but anyways I loved it and I'm hoping it was Anthony she was taking to, although I'm sure she'd recognize his voice.
    December 6th, 2010 at 06:42am
  • izzylizzy95

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    you should update this soon cause im really impatient :)
    December 5th, 2010 at 01:46am
  • izzylizzy95

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    one of the best stories on Mibba. Seriously why aren't there more comments.
    November 28th, 2010 at 01:55am
  • Yoghurt Mamogkat

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    i noticed you have nice dialogue/script.
    November 24th, 2010 at 12:51pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    GAAAAAH!
    Dang it, Bre!
    No, it should be DANG IT TANYA YOU BLEEEEEP!
    Ha. There. Anyway...I still like this.
    I really like this.
    November 22nd, 2010 at 12:34pm
  • polkadottedgiraffe11

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    LOVED it!!!! Update soon please! Loved the last line she said. "It means your not worth it!" Hahaha, I actually kind of feel bad for him though... he obviously likes her more than a fling, but he's still a jerk sometimes. Can't wait for the next chapter! =) <3 <3 <3
    November 22nd, 2010 at 07:31am
  • izzylizzy95

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    cant wait for the next one so update soon. i love this story
    November 22nd, 2010 at 06:41am
  • vani11alatte

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    Wow I really like this story, it's amazing I read it all instead of studying
    November 19th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    She needs to go away. That stupid little....beepbeepbeepbeeeeeepbeep...bleep...
    So, I'm under the impression that Miss Priss not only stole Bre's dress but planted the perfume and also told the security guard not to let them in. As in, she is such a BEEPITY BLEEP. :)

    Anyway, love the story and can't wait to see how it's resolved! :)
    November 18th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    That BITCH.
    And please pardon my French.
    I'm under the impression that they should just...kick her prissy little hiney or something.
    Ugh. I'm so pissed at her that I dont' know what to put now!!!
    Until next time, then...
    Grrrr.
    November 16th, 2010 at 12:00am
  • EarthParadise082397

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    LOVE IT reding this instead for doing my hw lol
    November 1st, 2010 at 02:09am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    She had fun! HAHAHAHA! Now she can't just drop him, because she had fun and he knows it! HA!

    Anyway, I love this, and I'm hoping for more sometime soon :)
    November 1st, 2010 at 12:04am