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  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    If she like, stands him up or something? Yeah. I might just cry.

    So he might not be sincere - how many teenage girls does that REALLY stop? I think the thing is we like to feel protected and safe when we've got a boyfriend, even if it's not something that's going to last. You know?

    Anyway, I can't wait for more, but I understand if it takes a while. :)
    October 28th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    He's a wee bit cocky, isn't he? Haha :)
    October 16th, 2010 at 10:14pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Oooooh....dear.

    Sorry it's not longer - I have homework I"m supposed to be doing...:)
    October 12th, 2010 at 11:49pm
  • polkadottedgiraffe11

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    Loved it!!! Update again soon please!!!!!!!! =) <3 <3 <3
    October 12th, 2010 at 01:32am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    DUN DUN DUN DUNNNNN. I'm excited to see where it goes from here...
    October 10th, 2010 at 10:00pm
  • AnotherCatastrophe

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    *clears throat* I LOVE THIS, PLEASE UPDATE SOME MOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEE!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3
    October 10th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    It's okay that it's been awhile, I still love it :)
    October 1st, 2010 at 01:14am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Oh noooo! She told Allison?

    I don't think it will be a secret much longer, then. Even if Allison likes Anthony - because really? Allison said that Bre was a good friend, and if you have a good friend you wanna do something nice for them even if it hurts you because that's just how good friends are...

    Anyway, aside from my rambling...so, can't wait for more!
    September 21st, 2010 at 12:09am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    I still love this.

    I liked her idea on how to get rid of him - it was ingenious, but it's too bad it didn't quite work out :)

    Until next amazing chapter :))))
    September 16th, 2010 at 11:55pm
  • izzylizzy95

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    jeez i love this story
    September 16th, 2010 at 08:19am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Okay, so first off: I love this :)

    Secondly, I love how she's going through all of these things to try to avoid Anthony. And she's kinda sorta freaking about how he now knows he's one of the 63 girls in AP Chemistry. It's not exactly THAT easy to figure out one girl from that many, you know? She SHOULDN'T have anything to worry about (at least, that would be my mentality in the situation at hand). Oh, well. Her worries just make the story all the more interesting!

    Until next time :)
    September 15th, 2010 at 12:24pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Ooh, update! :)

    Interesting. You know, you'd think getting in a stall, locking the door, and standing on the toilet and crouching down would be enough to hide...but then she goes all ninja and picks the vent! Haha, I love it xP
    September 13th, 2010 at 12:23pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    I read your other story, then I went to your profile and started to read this one. I have found that...I love it. Good job! I like how you're making it kind of a hide-and-seek thing, where she wants to make sure that Anthony never talks to her so she can't give herself away. It's really got my attention :)

    There are a few minor errors here and there, like you forget an opening or closing quotation mark, or your grammar is a little off, but otherwise, it's very readable and I will be subscribing now :) Keep it up!
    September 12th, 2010 at 12:20am
  • Zooey

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    I don't usually read this kind of story but I absolutely like this! :D Please continue!!!
    September 7th, 2010 at 07:34am
  • Miss Tyranny

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    Love it!! Please continue it ♥♥♥♥
    September 5th, 2010 at 02:07am