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  • VRose

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    This is such a great story. Hope you upload soon!!
    June 6th, 2012 at 01:03pm
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    I don't know how but I somehow managed to miss this chapter when you posted it so apologies for the late comment. And I totally understand the writers block thing, don't think I've written anything in 2 or so months :(

    As always though I loved this chapter. I loved the story of how Drew got her name and the relationship between Charles and Brian.
    More soon please?! Xx
    May 19th, 2012 at 09:36am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    loved the update!!! I hope Brian chooses Drew!!
    April 4th, 2012 at 09:58pm
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    I hope Brian chooses Drew, she's awesome! And Cori makes me laugh :D
    April 4th, 2012 at 05:57pm
  • pekigirl

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    yeeey Update!! :D I really liked it!! But that end.. daaamn , I'm so confused about everything. let's see what brian will do.. I loved it!!
    April 4th, 2012 at 01:40pm
  • trishahhh

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    Wow u updated! I've miss this story! Can't wait for more! So he decides to work things out with Michelle?
    April 4th, 2012 at 11:27am
  • Fast_Melodic

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    I AM SO SORRY THAT IT TOOK ME THIS LONG TO READ AND COMMENT.

    I got all busy and then completely forgot to read the update! This is actually the first time that I've been on my computer for longer than five minutes in like a week lol.

    Anywhooooo, I loved it! Like always it was a fabulous update! I think Drew's mom was my favorite part of the whole chapter. I aspire to be this woman. JK. She is great though lol.

    Also. I would like to have a golf course on my future home. I don't even play golf but how special would it make you feel to tell someone that you not only own a golf course but that it's in your fricken backyard.

    Oh and btw, pageant queens scare me. Especially the itty bitty ones.

    Annnnnnnd the little reunion between Drew and her daddy was adorable and "Awww" worthy. :)

    I LOVED IT, BEAUTIFUL! UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOOON. I SWEAR NEXT TIME I WILL READ IT AND COMMENT ON TIME INSTEAD OF WAITING FIFTY FIVE YEARS LATER!

    LOVE YOU! <3333
    November 22nd, 2011 at 07:24am
  • Tilers Haner

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    Aww, that conversation with her father brought tears to my eyes. Loved it Hun <3
    November 21st, 2011 at 12:59pm
  • pekigirl

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    D'AWW Brian was so cute when he said that thing about fathers loving their daughters . because whenever he had a daughter he would always love her :') GOD that was super cute.. and I'm glad Drew's father is okay now :D hope you update soon ^^
    November 15th, 2011 at 10:16am
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    her mother seems like a lovely woman.
    November 15th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • brianna7x

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    This stay at her parents' house is probably going to be prettttttty interesting ;]
    November 15th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • brianna7x

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    I've been wondering about this story! Loved the update!
    October 29th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • riellybabie101

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    yay an update!
    October 28th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • Tilers Haner

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    Okay so I may have squealed a little when I saw that you'd updated this :)
    So, Brian's taken his wedding ring off hey? That's a step in the right direction in my opinion, lets hope it stays off!
    Loved this chapter Hun and very much looking forward to seeing what happens while they are away from HB. :)
    October 25th, 2011 at 09:33pm
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    Chapter 20: The sexual tension between Brian and Drew is beginning to be too much for me! But I also think it's great that Brian went on the trip with Drew so he could get his feelings sorted, even though we all know that Brian is still in love with Drew!

    Update soon<33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    October 25th, 2011 at 07:27pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    loved it!
    October 25th, 2011 at 01:34pm
  • pekigirl

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    ahhhhhh finally you updated *-* thought you had stop writing! I'm so so so happy you're still on with this story!! LOVED IT :D
    October 25th, 2011 at 10:26am
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    "If you complain one more time, I'm going to have you stored in cargo with the cats and dogs." Drew growled at her
    at least she'll be entertained
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    "Overslept after a long night with Michelle."
    didn't want to hear about his sexcapades with Horse
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    "Where have you been all my life?!"
    apparently 20 mins away from me soon to be an 1 hour
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    "Please. I'm a master of disguise." He proudly gloated.

    "Synyster Gates!" A few young voices called out.
    careful what you say Mr. Gates!
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    "Please can we have a picture? My boyfriend won't believe me if I don't have proof."
    if there is no photo it didn't happen
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    Cori usually wasn't a fan of flying, but with perks like these; she could see herself gathering up her frequent flyer miles.
    and the mile high club.
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it!!
    May 28th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    The last line was just an evil place to stop at!!
    Come one...I really want to read more.
    So now I can say "lets get ready to rumble" haha!
    I don't like Michelle or the mechanics that are working in her head.
    She clearly sees how much Brian cares for Drew more then he cares for her.
    And she tries to hard. Just my opinion from what I've been reading in the story.
    0.0 I am so excited for NC.
    Though i am very anxious to see what Michelle has cooking.
    Like I am on the edge of my..wait i'm not on a seat...mmm...bed! Thats the word.
    O.O

    Thank you so so much for updating again!
    I love this story so much :]
    May 27th, 2011 at 06:25am
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