Burn - Comments

WOOOO.... I was so excited to see another update on this story.. It's one of my favorites.. Keep them coming!!!!

I'm not sure how fantastical this comment will be because I'm multi-tasking haha!

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You know, bonding time.

Is that what they're calling it now-a-days?

>:D

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You got a number from a married man?

S'okay. Val's not that special anyways.

Cori > Val

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Evan told that it would be a high society event scheduled for this summer.

That poor, unspecial child just keeps digging his hole deeper and deeper.

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new reality show.

OH MY GOD. THIS BOY NEEDS TO JUST VACATE THE PREMISES.

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Miss me?

Of course she did!

I miss you and we've never even met!

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She was flabby and stiff.

Okay, ew.

How I just pictured this chick is disgustingly horrible.

I got sidetracked and forgot to quote stuff and comment on it. Oops, haha!

I LOVED this chapter, though!

Update again soon! <3

Ugh, can I start off by saying that I HATE Evan! He's just a horrible person and he doesn't deserve Drew! She is far too good for him. You know who he should have..Michelle, they would be prefect together!

And do you know how happy you made me having Drew and Brian talking and being friends again!? I can't wait for Drew to get this plan going properly and bring that bitch down!

Loved the update Hun :)

THEY KISSED!!! LSAYDGFPIYEV;;
that was awesome:) I loved it, can't wait for the next chapter:D

Yes! They're friends again. :D
I think it'd be really cool to have the next chapter about Brian, though. Just to see what's been going on with him after Drew came back since we only see Drew's pov. (:

What?! He kissed her?!

I got a feeling that Drew bout to fuck some shit up. hehehehehehe

I was so happy when I woke up and saw the notification on my phone you'd updated! Can't wait for more. The anticipation of Michelle getting her ass handed to her makes me happy. Bitch. ;)

Part 1 complete: wow that was easy!
Part 2: hehehe I can't wait to see how that plays out :D

Great update<3
I greatly missed this story and was so happy to see that you updated ^^

I love the update please more soon

I love this story!!! Please update again really really really super dooper soon.

Evan needs to go away D:<

Love it love it love it.

YAAAAAY!!! They talked!!!
I really hope everything works
they deserve to be together

and Evan is a dick i cant believe he said that to her!
Drew needs to drop his ass >=\

and i wonder where Michelle was...probably off hoing around lol

and i LOVED the ending!
I hope things will only get better from here =)

awesome update! =)

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"It won't make me forget about the stupidest plan in the world!"

Oh, ye of little faith!

I have supreme confidence in this master plan. Sure, there will probably be a few bumps in the roard along the way, but it's gonna work out.

It has to!

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Drew knew the heartbreak she would feel if she got too close to Brian.

JUST TAKE A RISK FOR ONCE IN YOUR LIFE.

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Brian doesn't care about me and he never will

LIES. SUCH LIES.

It makes me sad how silly she is.

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Drew had her job, Evan, and a giant city to distract her.

OMG STOP CARING ABOUT EVAN.
HE DOESN'T MATTER.

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I can't stay in California forever.

Uhh...yes you can...

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How is it supposed to be small when we have like 500 people there?

-facepalm-
Was he dropped on his head as a child, or what?

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it would have looked like they were gazing lovingly at each other.

Oh, they totally are.
Even if they're wasted.
It doesn't matter.

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I'm in.

YES. FUCK YES.
-fist pumps-

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"What do you want?" He growled.

Stop being a dick or else I'll teleport myself into this story and beat your ass.

OMG WHY IS SHE LYING TO HIM.
SHE SHOULD JUST TELL HIM THE TRUTH.
JESUS FUCK.
BUT I SUPPOSE THAT IT'S TOO EARLY AND IT WOULD RUIN EVERYTHING.
I'LL STOP WRIITNG IN CAPS NOW.

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"I don't hate you. I could never hate you. I don't want you to ever leave me again."

Awwwww! See?!?!!? He does care. <3

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Suddenly, Brian's lips were down upon hers.

WHOA, WHAT?!
(Okay, I lied about the caps thing, but SERIOUSLY.)

JORDAN. YOU NEED TO UPDATE AGAIN VERY VERY VERY SOON, OKAY?
BECAUSE I'M DYING OVER HERE.

man that is a wonderful plan I just hope she doesn't get hurt

Wow... Cant wait for it to get hot!

i really glad you updated!!! please more soon!!!!! i really love this story and can wait for more!!!!!! ive read all the chapters like 3 times!!!!!

THIS WAS QUITE POSSIBLY THE BEST CHAPTER YET.
ALL BECAUSE THEY'RE PLANNING THEIR REVENGE.
AND I LOVED IT.

Sorry that I didn't leave a super long comment, but I have had a long day and I don't think I've got the brain capacity to do it right now.

But like I said, I loved it!

I can't wait for you to update again! :D

<3

Let the games begin!
I can't wait until MIchelle gets 3rd degree burn and finally goes away!
This is going to be so cool, but stage one has to be successful!!
If not then well everything else goes down the drain *flush*
Not good....o.o I really don't want Drew to go down the drain!
Do you know what lives in that tiny tube! Not fun stuff man XD

Grrrrreat update :)
I rrrrreally enjoyed it (:

Hell yes, you updated! Honestly, I reread this three times yesterday hoping you would update is sometime soon. This plan sounds so diabolical and is absolutely genius! I'll admit, I was very surprised that Drew had lost her virginity to Brian. I was not expecting that in the slightest. :P
Now I'm excited to see about the party. It's going to be crazy I bet. Can't wait for the next update! :) <3

Can't wait till Michelle crashes and burn.

Cori is awesome! I love her plan. I just hope that Drew doesn't get hurt.
Can't wait to see what happens next :)