Rêveur - Comments

I like this. It's very well-written and promising and it makes you wonder what exactly has happened to Jessica. One thing I think you could imprI've on would be her mannerisms, though... She wouldn't be laughing only a few seconds after she'd met this Will guy. Even if she warmed up to him a bit, it seems like there'd be a bit of stiffness and suspicion left there. You described her as untrusting, so make sure you keep her behaviors in line with that.
Other than that, it was really good. I'm subscribing, looking foreword to more! (:

I loved it. Really. And I hate to be this honest -a lie- but I was relieved it wasn't that long. I have a bunch of stories I have to read, since I promised. It was very good, though. The way you wrote it, it sounds silly, but it's almost as if it's a fairytale. That is silly, now that I read over it. Hahah.

Well, as requested, I read the story, and I find myself wanting more. I might subscribe, might not. If you post another chapter, and alert me of this, I think I just might subscribe. I saw the video, and I think I found it...familiar. Like, I've seen it before, but I can't remember where. Was that Disney Channel? X3

*mischievous snicker*

I liked the one with the long hair... Actually, I just love...his...hair. @_@ So...soft looking.

Oh, I'm sorry. I lost my train of thought. I enjoyed reading this story, very much so. Your details are very well put and well written. It's poetic, yet in a practical way. Not sure how to explain it. I'm bad at that.

Keep up the good work. ^-^

With admiration and an honest opinion as promised,
Luna.

I loved it. Really. And I hate to be this honest -a lie- but I was relieved it wasn't that long. I have a bunch of stories I have to read, since I promised. It was very good, though. The way you wrote it, it sounds silly, but it's almost as if it's a fairytale. That is silly, now that I read over it. Hahah.

Well, as requested, I read the story, and I find myself wanting more. I might subscribe, might not. If you post another chapter, and alert me of this, I think I just might subscribe. I saw the video, and I think I found it...familiar. Like, I've seen it before, but I can't remember where. Was that Disney Channel? X3

*mischievous snicker*

I liked the one with the long hair... Actually, I just love...his...hair. @_@ So...soft looking.

Oh, I'm sorry. I lost my train of thought. I enjoyed reading this story, very much so. Your details are very well put and well written. It's poetic, yet in a practical way. Not sure how to explain it. I'm bad at that.

Keep up the good work. ^-^

With admiration and an honest opinion as promised,
Luna.

Ooooh, yay! I love it.
:) I'm really excited to see how this continues.
Question of the day. Which one is Will?

This story is amazing.

Your writing is so pure and simple. It's like...I don't know, a movie, but it still has meaning to it. There's still those five senses around to let you know that it's...real life, but it's...not.

Hard to explain. xD

Beautifully done.

Dr.

The blistering cold tore at her skin in unexplained anger, her muscles tensing as she held her arms closely around her frail form.
That is an awesome opening line <3

The moaning of the tree's against the wind served as a lullaby
That line is so poetic and beautiful…!

I think the relationship between Will and Jessica is cute. It’s a realistic encounter, and I just have a feeling about it. :D

I think you’re an incredible writer. You seriously are <3

This story is just amazing.
Your writing is very elegant and proper, not sloppy and confusing.
The detailing is really good as well. Especially when you described the coldness and such. Lovely. (:
Another thing I like about this story is that it's not rushed at all, and worded carefully. You didn't lose me at all, unlike some stories do.
The layout is beautiful as well. It's simple yet tasteful. (:
Great job. I can't wait to read more. (:

I loved it!

I was cute. Small text but it was adorable! :)

<3

I loved this.
It was neat and wasn't rushed like most stories. And when I read the title, it made me think of Papa Roach's song Kick in the Teeth xD

AWEH<3
This sounds like it's going to be a slightly sad, but mostly just cute story. Like, Jessica will find love with Will and his room mate and she'll be okay. Her past sounds bad, especially since it's sort of mysterious still, and I'm sure that Will is nice enough to help her out.

UGH. This is just so adorable. (:

So I'm putting this right out: I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS. I love the way you write this; it's neat, doesn't just jump around, is sort of mysterious to me, and good Lord, it makes me want to continue reading. I really love Will. He and Jessica seem to be the perfect couple, even if they just met literally a moment ago. I'd really like to see them together :D
Anyways, lovely job as always <3

I'm really impressed by the way you wrote this.
The layout is so neat and clean.
I really like this, and will be waiting for an update.

I'm intrigued :)
I can't wait to see what happens here

So far this is very interesting and I like how you wrote it.
The layout is awesome too but I don't like how one bit of the banner is bad quality. D:
I'm not sure if it's supposed to be like that though..
Other then that, amazing job. I can't wait for the next chapter. <3

Interesting!
Can't wait to see how it works out!