That was quite..unique. I haven't read a story about strikes before, so it was rather cool. Honestly when I thought of the word "strike" I thought of bowling, or punching. This never came to mind. So I'm glad you were different aha.
Anyways, I like how there isn't a whole bunch of description, but you made it so there doesn't need to be. It's perfect just the way you wrote it. I like your writing style (:
I haven't read a story about strikes before, so it was rather cool.
Honestly when I thought of the word "strike" I thought of bowling, or punching. This never came to mind. So I'm glad you were different aha.
Anyways, I like how there isn't a whole bunch of description, but you made it so there doesn't need to be. It's perfect just the way you wrote it.
I like your writing style (:
Good job!