Deathbat High - Comments

I love this. You should update it soon, please?

more please

Definitley two great chapters
Both girls definitley go through a damn lot
They definitley need to tell each other what's going on in their heads
It's great that Jimmy and Brian offer their help to the girls
Well not help, but at least they'll lend them an ear to listen to
I really can't wait wait to see what's going to happen next
Hope you update soon :)

Very good. More soon?

Ah, wonderful, the appearance of Johnny! And I loves me some Johnny ;-)

But yeah! I love this story, I get an awesome feeling like I just did a massive sprint around a wooly mamoth when there's an update lmao ;-)

Brian is wonderful in this too, and I'd like to say, as English Lit being my favoritest subject ever, imagining him as my teacher has been lovely, what a couple of lucky characters you have :)

So yes! Update soon! I'll be waiting! :)

BREWHA-HA! :)

x Lulu x

Loved it More soon

Johnny is such a beast >.< lol. More soon?

Well this was unexpected....I checked my mails and when I clicked on this one, i saw that there were a shit load of new chapters
Hm, it's really nice of Brian that he won't press Riley to say anything that she doesn't want to
I really don't know what else to say, there were too many chapters ;p lol
Can't wait to see whats going to happen next
Hope you update soon :)

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! More soon?

love the update more when you can please

more please

Love it! "Mr. Sullivan" makes me laugh More soon?

Aw, I just noticed that there two updates already....I missed one

To Devon's: Seems like that accident, where she was involved herself, and her mom died really affected Danger
Even though, she seems to have fun with her friends and seems quite happy on the outside, on the inside it's quite something ddifferent
I think that maybe Jimmy, might be just the person to help her out
Oh, and I have to tell you should go and read through your chapter (chapter 5) as there were a few writing and spelling mistakes

To Ayla's: Hm, Riley really seems to disguise her inner feelings of what happened really well
Beside her outer bruises like the one on her chin, the others really don't seem to notice that something bad happened

I really can't wait for the next chapter
Hope you update soon :)

Awesome story can't wait for more

brilliant more when you can please

i enjoy this story and i as your reader demand more.

please ♥

Brian saw the bruise oh shit! More soon?

So, Brian saw Riley bruises.....he's probably now really suspicious about who did it....
Haha, only Jimmy could manage to burn himself in class
And he's even worse at home? Whoa Poor Brian....hehe lol
It is really important that she'll tell Danger about what happened.....something like this might be bad for her mentality
I'm really looking forwardf for more
Hope you update soon :)

Fuckin' awesome!
Jimmy as a science teacher? How damn cool is that?! Totally fits.
And I'd enjoy literature a little more if I had Mr. Haner as a teacher! ;D

Great job! Love it. Please update soon. <3
Oh! And how'd you make the class schedule? So cool...Please PM me! :D

I thought that the chapter was really great :)
So, Danger noticed that there was somehting wrong with Riley, but then she put it down to her just being beaten
I really wonder if Riley will tell Danger about what her father did to her
I can't wait to read the next one
Hope you update soon :)