i really liked it! theres not a lot of jb stories like this anywhere. i agree with ameliabelle and Killer_Cupcake!, you should continue it into a short story. (:
Imma go and be a total perve... DAMN! that was hot :D I don't un derstand why there isn't that many bieber storys like this one;) Haha but like rly, it was AWESOME! haha:D
i really liked that, it was pretty funny :) you should turn it in to a story where there just like.. friends with bonuses? if thats what you wanna call it :)