I liked the way you started this one. A friend kidnapping her because he cared about her, wanted to protect her. Being confused about everything, even the part where Brian felt the need to be honest with her. The smut is always welcomed, but, and you know I have to be honest with you, everything after that seemed rushed a little to me. I get admiring someone from afar, having feelings for them. But being in love enough to buy a diamond for them? I know they were friends, they trusted one another, but did they know each other well enough to be that in love? This was good, but personally I wanted a little more background and details to make it all fit together a little better, make sense? Love you! *runs and hides*
June 4th, 2011 at 06:53pm
