An Alternate Universe - Comments

Aw,that was so adorable. The ending, when his heart monitor was going faster, had me laughing so hard. That was hilarious. And this was suchhhh a unique one shot. The plot line for it was sooo different, that I absolutely fell in love with it, but no surprise there. Those two are just so adorable together <3

This was amazing!! I told you it would be! :) I loved it so much. It was such a great idea and of course I love happy endings. lol!! You know me. I'm a sucker for them. *sigh* I loved the humor you put in there with the characters. And yes I did catch the name-Dom. hahahaha!!! Oh man, I really shouldn't pick up on that sort of stuff. lol!! For the length of time it took to you write it, it was fabulous. Time makes it all the more better. I'm glad you finally took it out of your head and put it on here. Its so much more appreciated here ;)

Loved it tremendously!! Can't wait for more of your great ideas!!! <3

OMG!I love it! It's so cute! and the freaky part was where you said I dated a "Dom" and broke up with me b4 freshman year because he wanted to be a "free" man....actually happened but his name was "Tom" sooo freaky! Thank you so much!!