As a first Mibba story, it was amazing! I loved it! Great job!
September 8th, 2010 at 05:22am
Hello there! I believe I just took the comment virginity of this story. Firstly, congrats on making your first fiction here on Mibba!
I have to say, this was wonderful to read. It really gave me hope, and that people can actually change! I felt relieved and happy for the main character. The way your wrote was simplistic but it gave enough detail for the reader. Good job! And I look forward to read your future stories. =]