Wow that was a shocker, I was hoping for them to talk about what happened instead of ignoring the situation. Poor Harley, that's just gonna make her feel the pain all over again, well done Alex, you think with your ..... instead of your brain. I hope they can work it out & who knows, they might get some action in haha :) P.S I love your updates, they make me really happy.
So great! I love this story. I feel her pain when they refer to that last summer. He totally just ripped her apart and he has the audacity to ask her what if? Gah.... well done.
“My truck is fucking fabulous, thank you very much.” I couldn't help but laugh, that was my favorite part in this chapter. :D Oh but it's turning out really well, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! Anyways I need another update soon. I can't wait! And GOD! Alex needs to just come to his damn senses! lol Anyways, I'm glad you updated quickly, I'm so happy! I love this story so much :)
JESUS, WOMAN. You are just churnin' them updates out! LOVE THIS CHAPTER. Although, I would really like to see some Alex/Harley lovin'. You had me hopeful there for a sec then, BAM. All hope= gone. Thanks for that, by the way.
Daaaaaaaaaaaayum, go Harley, tell Alex who the fuck is boss. I think that definitely needed to happen, now he knows what's what and that she was actually affected by the last summer they spent together. Maybe now he'll shape up and get rid of Lisa all together and she can dump Max to the curb aaaaand they'll be in love. :D
I totally get giddy every time i see this story has been updated. :D Alex is such a fucking hottie. He's so... Dashing. xD Hate Max. Always have. ... prick.
God, Max is such a prick! I swear. Anyway. Great chapter, Alex and Harley are good together, even just as friends. I dunno if I want them together or not though, because I think what Alex had done to her was beyond reproach. So i have no clue. But continue writing please!
Alex & Max remind me of Harry Potter & Draco Malfoy because of there fights & how they pronounce last names, "Gaskarth" & "Porter". I'd really to to see some lovey action, depends who with though.
Love the chapter. I'm so glad she went with Alex and not Max. I hate Max, what a prick! I don't know if you know but you used a couple of song titles from Dirty Work (Forget about it and Return the favor) I thought it was really funny to read. Can't wait for the next chapter <3
I AM PEEING EVERYWHERE. YOU UPDATED. No, just kidding. I'm not peeing. But I was jumping for joy. LITERALLY. Jumping. Update soonerthansoonerthansoon? And, by the by, I just thought I'd let ya know, you're writing has become amazing, so, four for you, Glenn Coco.
This chapter was amazingggg and so awkward. The sexual tension betwee the two is ridiculous, I can barely handle it, haha. And once again, I will repeat: Max Porter is a fuckin' dillhole. He needs to shove off to somewhere uncomfortable where people only wear things from off the rack (*GASPOHMY! PEOPLE DO THAT?!*) and Alex and Harley need to be happy and in love. I hope the writer's block disappears and you have more luck with thiiiisssss, because I love it so fucking much. And I would definitely love to see more Alex&Harley action in the next chapter... maybe a little summin-summin juicy? :D <3
I could smack you, for taking so long to update, but I won't seeing as how lengthy, and amazing, and (did I mention?) lengthy this chapter was. Very well written, and you should know that the sexual tension between those two is making me want to tear my hair.
I did a happy dance, by the way, when I read your Author's note. REGULARLY UPDATING?! Seems almost too good to be true. You should know, that this is one of my favorite Gaskank stories of all time, and I re-read it quite often. I hope you UPDATE QUICKLY!