Let It Go - Comments

Im glad you enjoyed it and I actually thought I took out all the Immas and turned them into I ams but oh well.. And i noticed that as well. But it was three in the morning and I got lazy...

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And thanks reapervampire.

Well, there goes my happiness. *starts sobbing* It was good though.

I really enjoyed this[: I'm glad to see you where able to pull this together so quickly, too
There where a few grammar problems, but the one that stood out most was your use of the word 'Imma go out to lunch with my sister' or something along those words. Imma is okay to use for some things, but when writing, you shouldn't use words like that.
But, aside from that, the rest was good. The ending was sad, and I didn't exactly like how you wrote the ending. You could have done something a little more creative, maybe written into Liams head as he heard the news and killed himself.
All in all, the story was good with a few minor problems
I feel it fit well to the song.

Good Luck :D