Trapped - Comments

This was a awsome story...im sad its being deleted but i guess yo have yur reasons so i get :P

It's sad to see this story being deleted but u did it wit good intentions sooo good luck on tht screenplay how to read more of ur stories :)

I'm sorry that this story is going to be deleted soon. Can you please give me permission to at least copy it down into a word document? I promise that I won't publish it or use it any other way except for my own use (reading). I pinky promise, I swear!!!!!!

omg i love this story you have to update soon please!

Love the new update morebplease

I love the setting. Very creative.
But I don't know, I'm not trying to be mean, but I found the story kinda boring, and it didn't hold my interest for long.
Sorry.

Love it!!

I love this story. It is quite amazing!! :)

happy as hell that jim is now back and talking. i think it's crazy that matt would sleep with another women to keep the peace...that just seems stupid and nuts to me, but ah if that's what it takes then go head, but he could have told her about it before he did it

Love the new update more please

damn, them bitches be bi-polar!

Love the story. Hopefully Jimmy doesnt die.

Love the story. Hopefully Jimmy doesnt die.

This is awesome can't wait for more :D
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love it! update soon please?

i dont think its his!
matt needs to do something to prove her he is sorry

This story is awesome! Kind of scared for Matt, though. When a woman's been trained, all she needs to beat the crap out of a man is her high heels.

stupid matt cheating is never good...she's going to hate him for a while now

I can't wait for the next update! This is getting so damn good right now

oh looks like Brian found someone he could take to the ball! nice update