Last comment; This was pretty much amazing. Again, your writing is so amazing that I honestly can't find any grammar errors. You have a real talent for writing :D I loved the detail of how everything went along. The only problem I had was the link you gave me for this was to My Name Is Wes again, but I was able to find it easily xD Again, nice work!
So sweet. It was really good you've done it again hahah. But did you have to pick Ray and Jay? -throws up- Thats my moms ex and his twins name and I really don't like them lol an of course y stupid brain pictured them the whole time hahahah. But after I got past that it was a really great love story perfection. :)