Kings and Queens of Promise - Comments

Gay polygamist thing, lol. Just started reading your rewrite and then thought i should read this first. So far so good. The first chapter is creepy but funny :D

D'AWWWWWWWWWW CUTE BABY CHAPTER ;_; IT WAS SO CUTE god damn sebastian

I like this story as well as your sequel do you still update this?

So uh.....this chapter...made me want to throw something at the wall...LIKE FIVE TIMES
which i guess is a good thing
fuck pierre
jared needs to get some balls and take her from him
i hate pierre
otay done XD

*ahem* well may i begin with i absolutly love your story and everything one in it. Now with that out of the way blahhhhhhhh no no no no nooooooo! I want Jack to go away Pierre to take that proposal and shove it and her together with Jared.... is that so selfish of me? :P I love love love your story otherwise I would remain a silent reader :P update soooon? pleaseeeee :)

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awesome update. can't wait for the next

Trust me, I know EXACTLY what you're talking about. It sucks xP
ANYWHORE, amazing update :) I loved it. I really like the way you like, completely changed the story but kept the basics :) it makes it possible for me to read one of my favourite stories again without know ing exactly what's going to happen.

I love the story can't wait for the next chapter

I love this story. It's funny and you're a great writer.

DAMN. you really have changed it a lot. I like it though :)

I got the update and was all "da fuq?!" and then I clicked it and got even more confused. And this was all just very confusing haha. But so far I like this rewrite. Stoked for the next chapter

Oh my GOODNESS. I freaking LOVED this. Words can not even describe how much I LOVED this story. Like, damn. I'm kinda sad that it's over ;( bu I understand. Life must go on. Lol.
Btw, I'm not sure if you did it on purPose or not (and you shouldn't change it even if you didn't) I love how her first day was "november 31st" since that's not a real date ^_^ it fits the story really well as a joke type thing. I'm probably not making since anymore but, yeah. I liked that :) i almost cried at the end. I think it was just the fact that they were leaving the mansion. It made me sad in a happy way. ;)
Ok. I'm done leaving a super long comment. Lol. This story reall was amazing though:)

i loved this story:)
it was amazing so congrats
im so glad you didnt put anything about it bein a mutant story in the summary or i wouldnt of read it
so thank you:)

Haha I loved the story!! Amazing!! Very original!! I want to keep reading it over and over again!! ^_^
Is there going to be a sequel? XD

i loved it i can't wait to read the sequel :)

yay! I always wanted Jared to get together with Emerson :3
epic story your sequels epic too

Wow!!! I loved it!!! OMFG! the end is amazing!!!

Congrats!

I LOVED THIS STORY!
AND I LOVE YOU!
Thank you for writing it!!

-J

100 DUDE! YES!

“Then the doctor took a blood test and turns out the baby’s Pierre’s. He thinks our ‘abnormalities’ are what made the baby have blue eyes.”
So I was off...but I still knew Jared and Em hadn't slept together!

“Baby!” I heard Jimmy shout before I was glomped by the giant man.
Jimmy! *glomps giant man*

I watched Brian grab Violet, throwing her over his shoulder as he jumped into the pool
Haha figures!

We were the Kings and Queens of Promise.
Awe! *huggles everyone*

IT WAS WORTH EVERYTHING CAUSE ITS SOOO AMAZING!
YAY SEQUEL TIME!

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100TH FREAKING COMMENT! HELL TO THE YEAH!