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  • Neche Narcissist

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    OMG! Wats going on?! He can do mind control?! whyd he shove Em?! Why is he being a dick?! Did Jared set the apointment? I bet he did...
    January 25th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • xBuryMe

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    Holy Crap! That was intense! I honestly didn't see that one coming. :O Poor Jared though.. :/ Em needs to open her eyes and realize Jared loves her, I mean look at all the things he has done for you.
    January 25th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • Somehow.Saving.You

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    I really hope she kicks him to the curb, well not literally, but she's not happy with them and it wont change. She deserves to be happy and Jack had a point, the girl could still have her father under the same roof. Loved it by the way!
    xXx
    January 25th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • Kaner92

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    -_- im liking this fast updating but very upset she said yes. i would never marry someone who raped me.

    YAY jared haha i loved that scene at the end. im happy your fingers took you there

    cannot wait for an update =)
    January 25th, 2011 at 02:11am
  • Kaner92

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    if she says yes she will be forever on my shit list. or my hit list. whichever is shorter lol.
    jared + emerson = perfect storm
    piere + emerson = hurricane katrina

    EMERSON THINK DO NOT SAY YES obviously jared loves her or he wouldnt be all moody.

    PLEASE update soon i honestly love this story and think it is the best story containing jared leto or brian haner in the world.
    January 25th, 2011 at 02:03am
  • Somehow.Saving.You

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    Oh damn! Definitely wasn't expecting that! I wonder if that's why Syn was so pissed? Cuz it's kinda obvious that was why Jared was. Personally I think she should say no... just in my opinion of course!
    Loved it by the way!
    xXx
    January 25th, 2011 at 12:09am
  • Neche Narcissist

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    “Well, even so, you’re somebody to Alex. And Jack. And Frank and Zacky. Even to Syn. Hell, even to the other losers that bum around the mansion. They all fucking love you! And, Em, that baby is going to fucking love you. You’ll be like the sun to that baby; she won’t be able to live without you.”
    That mademe smile so big you don't evenknow, I love this story so much. Update soon.
    January 20th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • NothanksImgood

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    Bri...giving up his room? Holy cheeseburger! Frankie and Zacky with the baby? That would be so....AWESOME!!!!! Awe yay! Jared went with her! Good! I adore him...more soon?
    January 10th, 2011 at 05:31pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I can't believe it! What what?
    She can't be thinking this, i really hope that she does what i think she's going to do.
    aw Jared, he's a super sweetheart.
    hope to read more.
    sarah.
    January 10th, 2011 at 03:43am
  • xBuryMe

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    Omg, omg this was amazing! :D
    January 10th, 2011 at 12:14am
  • Neche Narcissist

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    Yay! Jared's with her...
    January 9th, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • HurricaneTaylor

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    i really liked this update :)

    and with my stories i have one that i'm making up as i go and another that i'm not gonna post until i have it completely finished :)
    January 9th, 2011 at 05:09pm
  • Jennywho

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    I love you! And i love this story! <3
    January 8th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • Neche Narcissist

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    Iknow when I saw Pierre was the bad guy I was like "Noo!" XD. I don't think anyone plans out their stories. It makes it better because sometimes the story and characters write the story themselves (mine do anyway) its like they come to life and the story unfolds before me X).
    January 8th, 2011 at 08:29pm
  • Marinesister92

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    So, i just read all this in the past two days, and i really like it. It's got a lot of humor and some parts made me kind of angry but that goes for any story.
    I love Jared and how Brain changed, i think it will be interesting to see where it goes.
    Trust me i know what you mean about not trying to make him the bad guy, when i write my stories, i type them up in word but i go as i feel and then realize i hate how i made someone seem horrible.
    Sarah.
    January 8th, 2011 at 08:20pm
  • NothanksImgood

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    Oh wait..it is posted...

    IT'S PIERRE'S BABY?????!!!?!?!?!?!?! HOLY CHEETOS!

    Awe! Owned! lol...sorry I comment as I read today apparently...

    “I’m pregnant, remember? I’m always hungry.”
    Haha best line!

    And I totally make all of mine up as I go along. I have yet to stick to the orginal idea...*dances* Awesome chapter though! I'm glad Pierre is gonna at least try to be nice and supportive!
    January 8th, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • NothanksImgood

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    And with Tre!
    Duckie! Lol sorry...that's what I think of everytime I see Tre... <3

    February 23rd
    OMG, I hate being a girl

    Gee..I wonder...lol

    Am I the only one who goes...what, she's still on the pmsing part two weeks later? Bad....very bad sign...and there goes the others! Ha! I was right!

    Baby! *cuddles Em's tummy* Hi baby!
    JACK! I DON'T GIVE A FLYING FROOT LOOP IF YOU DIDN'T WANT A BABY! DON'T BE SILLY, WRAP YOUR WILLY!!! or don't have sex! Duh!

    And I sooo want you to post it! Please please please plleeeeeeeaaaaassssse??????????
    January 8th, 2011 at 07:11pm
  • Neche Narcissist

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    I just read the whole thing... ITS AWESOME! Like serious different from anything ive ever read and im UBER <yes i used that word... excited for more!
    January 8th, 2011 at 11:11am
  • Scorpianram99

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    awesome
    more more more
    oh boy there a bun in the oven hahaha
    January 8th, 2011 at 08:50am
  • xBuryMe

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    Wow, you seriously need to post the other chapter! :)
    January 8th, 2011 at 08:31am