I Told You This Would Happen - Comments

  • youth and whiskey.

    youth and whiskey. (415)

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    Haha! This amused me. I can imagine a nervous boy leaning in to kiss a girl and BAM they collide and both end up hurt. It's not funny, but it so is. Hahaha. Anyway, this was cute, but it could use a little more detail about what was going on. But that's my only complaint. It was a nice, simple read. I enjoyed it. :)

    Good job! <3
    September 16th, 2010 at 12:44am
  • desiher

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    I don't know why, but I also found this funny.

    Good write, but I don't think it seems drabble-worthy, if you know what I mean.
    I wasn't sure exactly what was going on, and I'm still not exactly sure.
    It seems like ther should be more to the story; like I [sort of] said, it just doesn't seem like it should be a darbble.

    Good start, though.
    September 7th, 2010 at 08:42am
  • lexar

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    Hahah, this is funny.
    September 6th, 2010 at 07:29am
  • cosmicanparo

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    cool!
    September 6th, 2010 at 06:09am