The School Of Mystic - Comments

First of all, I love this story!
I'm not overly a huge fan of supernatural school stories, but yours called to me.
It's so different, and the writting technique is amazing.
I only noticed a few mistakes, in chapter two, otherwise everything was perfect. :)
Your description is amazing and colourful, I can't say anything about improving it ...
The only tip I can think to give you, is to put something in the summary about how to pronouce the main three characters names.

All in all, an amazing story, can't wait to find out what happens, :D
*subscribed*

Awesome update xD

whoop i'm loving your story so now ya love me! xD

Wow, Minh, or is it Mihn?, seems so calm and open-minded. lol.

I love it, please update soon?

i'm subing!

I liked the idea of this. I honestly only read the first chapter (since I was told my dinner is now ready). Plus, it was really hard for me to stay focused on the story, since the default layout clearly takes away from it. I really think you should either pick one of the premades, or make your own layout. It's kind of sucky to know that this could be a really awesome story, but I spent more time worrying about the layout and now the story. One other thing is, the really long author's note at the end was completely unnecessary.

I do, however, love the name Mirabelle. =] It's very dainty, and elegant.

So, I like the idea of this. I'm always up for a good fantasy.
Maribelle seems like a character I can compare to, I really like her.
I love reading long chapters, even though I read them wicked fast...
So I loved the chapters you wrote (typed-whatever.)
I think you should make a layout for this. This default one is just too plain :P
Overall, nicely done.

So, I really like this story!
I love the name Mirabelle. I used it for a faery character before.
But that's off the topic here :o
I love your writing style, and I love your main character.
There's not much more I can say than that xD
I did notice, though, that you tend to use the wrong form of 'through.' You use 'threw' when it should be 'through.'
You did that in both chapters. :o
But that's it.
Keep writing this story! <3

I like it!!