wow thats stupid! who ever told u to f___ off should f___ off themselves! there is nothing wrong with this story. its absolutley amazing if u ask me. nd awsome update :D
i just found this story, and may i say, i LOVE it. really. it's amazing, you're amazing, everything you write is amazing. i'm not trying to sound like i want to marry you. just your writing skills. :3 now, that i've told you a compliment, i swear to god that if she doesn't marry zacky, i will go ninja all over you. okay, i'm kidding. you'll wind up making some awesome twist out of it. update soon? :D