Gilded Fingers - Comments

Oh my god.
*swoon

Oh my god, I'm seriously inlove with you right now!
That was so loving and beautiful and so easy to picture in your mind and envy,
Hayden Christensen was amazing in Takers as AJ I went and saw it four times ; ) lol.
Loved it missy, wish there was more.<3

You have such an eloquent way of writing, Aliyah. Just, guh. It's really so beautiful.
It was really great and not awkward at all. The end was awesome, I like it when sex scenes end on a light note like that. You did a fantastic job!
And thanks for the ded, love.

The dude looks like Hayden Christensen x] If it is him, then sorry. It's sort of late-ish here xD Anyways, I'm not much for sex. Actually, I don't like sex at all. But you made it seem...beautiful, almost. Not scary or painful. I like this sentence the best: "After our next heist, I think I'll buy us a piano," he cooes.
Despite the sex, I enjoyed this. It's amazingly written. Lovely job! <3 (:

This was actually really cool and unique. I've never read something like this. There was a lot of story, or a lot of story we could make up in our heads to go along with it, and a lot of sexy time all in one, proper chapter. I liked it. You write sex in a very classy way.

dude.

THAT WAS AWESOME.

I love the layout and unf. Amazing.
You gave me butterflies when you mentioned me.

I loved it and I love you.

:) He's so cute. I'm so glad you made me...rerealize that. Because honestly, I'd forgotten.
And lord am I glad you used my name for this. That just made it SO much better.
I'm kind of like...oh loooooord yes. Right now, because I really wish that actually happened.
Criminals are so sexy, especially criminals that look like that.

I can tell you're a newb at writing sex scenes, but to be honest it didn't bother me. It sounds great and it was sexy and I loved it. I love the random, oh hey, let's fuck on a piano. It was great, and just everything was awesome. XD Love it bb.