Angel on the Beach - Comments

Well shit,
first thing I thought of was fail,
but I think that's mean, so let me rephrase that. xD
I think that he needs to take some swimming lessons. xD
Innywho.
I think,
that it was kinda cute. :]
And the boy's hair is frickin rad.
<3

i love how they met :]
for a minute there, i thought he was a goner.
but then i thought about it, and i was like, "Nah, he's the main character! He's not going to die!"
so of course, i read on, and then comes "prince charming" saving his ass :]
i subscribed, 'cause you're an awesome writer and i like this <3

update soon? :D

♥

Really pretty writing, dear.
But, I'd like to let you know-- and it might be just me--
That the links in the authors note in Chapter 1 don't work.
Again, it might be just me.
But your writing is beautiful beyond belief.

:0

I love this. ^_^;
<3

I really really like this! Totally interested in it haha(: excited for the next update <3

I stalk peoples who write slash.
Oh yus I do.
>:D
xD
Innywho.
I'm interested.
<3

As always, my dear, your stories are wonderful. <3 Your writing- I enjoy it very much. There's some...welled up emotion in each sentence, as if you had been waiting long to say the words. In this case, type them.

*snicker*

This story was delicious to read. Yes, I did say that- no, no. Delicious. I said that. Hahah.

Yum :3 The taste of the description and emotion in the writing was wonderful. Like a sweet lollipop covered in rainbows. I don't particularly like rainbows, so you can guess who a good story can change someone's point of view.

With a rainbow colored lollipop and a flying kiss,
Luna.