A Hotter Kiss, a Better Fuck - Comments

  • Angelus.

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    -melts-
    that chapter was incredible In Love

    you have to do a sequel! I love this way too much =]
    September 28th, 2008 at 02:26am
  • merance

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    Oh God, please, sequal?!
    RIGHT, FEEDBACK.
    That was an amazing chapter - I could really feel the love between Gerard and Frank.
    ALSO, the bond between the band is amazing, and I love how supportive Ray and Bob are. (Ray and Quinn, lmao!)
    *OHNOS*, what's up with Brian?! *legasp*
    September 28th, 2008 at 01:56am
  • anjiestaar.

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    NOOOOOO!!!!!!!\
    SEQUAL!!!!
    SEQUAL!!!!!!
    SEQUAL!!!!
    Even though i've pretty much lost intrest in Frerards, this is one that im still fucking addicted to...
    Pwease?
    More?
    -big puppy dog eyes-
    September 27th, 2008 at 11:55pm
  • Alice Verney

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    awwwwwwwww cute ending
    September 27th, 2008 at 09:54pm
  • Dorian Gray

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    Aww, that was so effing beautiful! This is the best day ever is an amazing song In Love

    and I really hope you do write that sequel.. I have a feeling it would be wuite amazing :D

    :arms:
    September 27th, 2008 at 09:49pm
  • Demon Ninja

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    wow...
    That was was noble of Mikey...
    I love this story!!
    Smiley
    September 22nd, 2008 at 10:19pm
  • Renesmee Cullen

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    *sobs* OMFG THAT WAS SO FUCKING BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 11th, 2008 at 05:54pm
  • xXBrokenxRosesXx

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    Fucking INCREDIBLE. I actually adore this story, You've put so much emotion into the characters and gah, i just love it!
    September 10th, 2008 at 06:35pm
  • mcrlover1621

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    i love this story. its the best fucked up love triangle ever!
    September 10th, 2008 at 06:10am
  • ray_toro_is_hot

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    aww glad everything is alright again!! more please!
    September 10th, 2008 at 05:12am
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    Ah, I'm so glad that you decided to do this chapter in Mikey's POV. It's kind of like coming full circle; now it's time to see Mikey's side of things. :)

    You really managed to capture Mikey's true bitterness in this chapter, especially near the beginning when he was talking about Frank coming into the picture. When he explains things like that, you have to feel a little bit sorry, because that kind of situation happens to so many people, and you're powerless to stop it. I think that since you took over, you managed to turn Mikey into someone we can all relate to, rather than a... puppet, of sorts.

    It surprised me at first that Frank was so forgiving but I suppose it's a lot better that way than having him still completely angry. But with the things in this chapter, it really becomes obvious that all of them were almost playing a kind of game with each other, just trying to seperate each other so that they could have the one they wanted. I never would have thought it that way before but now I realize just how deep this plotting went, instead of being just mindless fucking. Y'know?

    That ending very nearly made me tear up as well; it's so bittersweet for Mikey and you expressed that very, very well. I cannot wait for him to get his own happy ending. It rather saddens me that this story is coming to an end but you're doing a very good job at tying up all these loose ends. :cute:

    Awh! :arms: Thank you so much for the dedication darling; you're definitly the Frank to my Mikey. <3
    :arms:
    September 9th, 2008 at 10:08pm
  • Angelus.

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    That was so beautiful... Fantastic chapter. You're really good at writing emotions and caracter.. I lurve it.
    can't wait for more =]
    September 9th, 2008 at 09:49pm
  • Danielle McCracken

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    cutest. chapter. ever.
    =]
    September 9th, 2008 at 09:46pm
  • mein herz brennt

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    hotness FRERARD FOREVER
    September 9th, 2008 at 07:33pm
  • Dorian Gray

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    Aww! that a/n was so cute :D I wish I had a Mikey In Love

    Great update! I'm so happy that everything is okay between Mikey and Frankie..

    hopefully Frank and Gerard can move on together now ^^
    September 9th, 2008 at 07:01pm
  • merance

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    What an incredibly lovely, loveing chapter. Oh, I do love this story.
    :D SEQUALYESPLS!
    September 9th, 2008 at 06:25pm
  • Loopy-Lizzie-

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    I frikin' love this story.

    thanks for updating.
    September 9th, 2008 at 08:45am
  • xxkimmi

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    Loved the last chapter, made me cry :]
    September 9th, 2008 at 06:54am
  • MollieSue

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    Oh c'mon!
    You know without comments that we love this story and we never want this to end!Yes
    I've already told you this before,but I'll do it again anytime :
    You're amazing writer.
    You write the best stories I've ever read.Seriously.In Love
    This is one of my favorites,and I'm glad you haven't ended it yet,though the end is close I know.
    Everytime I read an update by you, I feel like I'm there, in the place the characters are.
    It just feels so real.
    You just seem to be so into writing.
    You never give us shitty updates.Never.They're always written with feeling.

    You obviously really love to write. So you should keep on writing and making other people happy.:')
    I personally hope you never stop writing.

    You made my day once again with awesome update.
    YOU ROCK!:arms:

    Love,
    Elina
    xxx
    September 3rd, 2008 at 04:41pm
  • isobellakaulitz

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    ohhhmyyy

    ive wanted to know who wrote this story ever since i PRINTED it out and put it in a folder to take to school and read, along with the other few stories i found rather interesting ... =))
    September 2nd, 2008 at 05:09am