OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So you are turning this one into a short story or something like that?! XD I am so excited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man his plastic whore is so annoying! I can't believe she did that to Ella!!!!!! I already hate her!!!!!!!!!!! Plastic bimbo!!!!!!!!!!!! I sure she really needs her ass kicked because she just dissed Brian's best friend and he didn't anything about it!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow so Jonah really is a sweet guy, letting a complete stranger unload her problems onto him without asking anything in return. I felt like crying when Brian listened to his (trailer trash) wife when she said she wanted to go and lay with him! XP (Gags) Well I look forward to the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
ohhhhhhhhhhh. This is lovely. :D I really love the way it's written firstly. It's so smooth and pretty like. The way you word things and just, yesh it's lovely.
I can't wait to see how Jonah fits into this all and what happens with the wife and Brian. Lovely. Please update when you get the time. I'm going to subscribe to this amazing story.
i cried my eyes out when i read the one shot and i was crying again when i read it
i just loove this story;D