Draco's Diary - Comments

There's been no update.... *sadness*

I was looking forward to seeing the rest of Draco's reaction. :3

.... It's ending? D:

I'm just a little lost at one part. Maybe it was just my computor. Maybe it was purposful. But I somehow missed when she stopped talking to Harry a second time and started hanging with Malfoy.

Otherwise...... I'm sooooo excited for an update!
But I see you haven't updated in over half a year.... *sad face*
Please pick it back up!
Pwese?

My god. I beg for a sequel. I am on muh knees beggin' for a sequel. I adore this story!

I totally forgot how much I loved this story. too bad its ending...

Oh, Please please update!!!! I'm biting my nails waiting for the ending here!!!!!! Please? :D

Wait... last chapter?
What do you mean last chapter!
NO!
(but great update! I don't want this to end. D: )

I clicked on your story and started to read the first chapter. As soon as I finished reading Draco's diary entry, I just had to comment. The imagery you used made it to where I could visualize everything that Draco had. I felt like I was a part of his dream and my heart beat faster as if I were feeling what Draco was.
I'm actually impressed. Your the first writer I have come across on this site that made me feel this way. Thanks and keep up the amazing work. I love it.

Great update!
I can't wait for the next one. :D

I just started reading this story and I already like it. Best part so far: "Stupid mutt...I hope he gets fleas." that was too cute. Ok, just wanted to say that. Back to reading.

Well, I'm caught up, but now I'm regretting it.
AAAHHHH!!!!!!!
WHY WAS LUCIUS IN HER DREAM???
WHO SCREAMED?
WHAT HAPPENED?
WHEN'S THE NEW UPDATE COMING!!!!!!??????!!!!!!!

On a less, caps lock related note, I think this story is awesome! I honestly can't wait for more. I love that you're having her be friends with both Harry and Draco. I like that she's a Gryffindor as well, it's like a forbidden love for everyone alive! ha.

Awesomeness.

I love this story, Rayline is such a breath of fresh air to draco fanfics. This story is addicting, I read it all in like an hour. Keep up the awesome story. :P

I love this story!!! Rayline is such a badass!!!
Keep up the awesome work!!!

I'm on part 9, so I'm not quite caught up, but this is really good.
I like the twist with the prophecies, very nice. :D

I'm taking a break now, because my eyes hurt, but be warned. I will finish this, and comment like CRAZY!

its amazing

so if you dont update soon my hairs going to fall offf!!!!!!!!!!!i still cant get over the whole co-co thing lol im hysterical:-)your story is amazing,and your such a good writer like you can tell you actually know how to write maturly and you have excellent vocabulary words,and im super impressed with what you have so far.I just started continuing to write my draco fanfic after i read urs thanks for getting me started again............. your like my new role model seriously:-)

So I think something big should happen next!(whatever your little writers creativity desires) but definetly something big, and I was reading how you think the story is dragging out but it's not(: The longer the story the more detailed.. Good luck! Hope to see another chapter soon(:

The formatting of this makes the story look really weird. I would say either not break after every sentence and left align it. Also, you're supposed to space after every paragraph. Also there were a few spelling errors and you forgot to capitalize a few 'i's'. But otherwise, while I don't really read fanfiction much, I don't know why I don't read HP fiction because I actually have a feeling I would like it--this was quite nice. It's not something I would normally pick out to read, but it's still got potential. Very nice.

I like this very much! Love the insight into Draco's mind

Love your story, I would like to see more from Dracos POV though.