Phenomenon - Comments

Soon its been forever since your last update. I really hope you haven't forgotten this story.

just found this story and loving it
can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Oh my god I can't handle waiting 4 months for an update!!!!
This does remind me a bit of elfen Lied but with a few twists, I quite enjoy it.
Great anime btw <3<3

So, I opened this story not really sure what to expect, and after reading the summary, I was convinced that this was going to be some kind of off-the-walls-crazy story that wasn't thought through well, and was just some half-assed attempt at being original. I almost closed out the window right away, already having decided I wouldn't like it. Mind you, I'm terribly stubborn in my ways, and once I form an opinion, it's hard as hell to get me to change it. That being said, I'm taking the time to admit that I was completely, utterly wrong. This story is by far one of the most original pieces I have ever read on any site, and it seems like you've truly thought out everything. I'm hooked, love, completely hooked. Congrats to writing a truly captivating story that puts a new spin on fan-fiction, and also does a good job of capturing the guys' personalities. I particularly love your characterization of Jimmy.

And one more thing that really made me respect you: you broke Val off from Matt in a completely respectable way and did not lower her to the status of the jealous bitch of an ex. I mean, I get why some people choose to make her go that route, because of the nature of their stories and whatnot, but I absolutely hate the disrespect that woman usually gets. I'm seriously impressed with how you've handled her role in the story, getting her out of the main character's way but not degrading her from the wonderful person she is in real life in any way, shape, or form. Seriously: props to you.

Oh, and, obviously, I'm a new reader. xD Subscribing as I type. Even with that said, I feel the need to let you know that I'm sure everyone understands when life gets in the way. You've got your life to put first; making our lives all the better by updating your story should always be a second -- we get that. Don't sweat it if you can't update quickly. But, you still should totally update this epic story, as soon as you are capable. (; LOVE IT!

seriously you have to update soon, its the most addictive story ever, and also the most interesting and well written, i actually can't wait to read more so don't make me wait!

I really like this. It's very different and perfectly executed. :) Keep on.

I found this story, and I Fucking love it! Please update, it's really that good!

It's a very good story, but im getting confused when she speakes to him in her mind. Would you mind putting her thoughts in a different form or something just to clear the confusion. That would be greatly appreciated. :D

yey yey update
she wants to feel something
matt should have been more cautious in what he said
love it

I love it!
Escpecially the fact that it's original.
Update soon!!!

This story is tooo good! i haven't read one that i have liked this much in a long time!
please please update soon!!!!!!!!

Love it seriously.

I was so happy when I saw that you updated! I can hardly get over how cute Matt is and how he treats her!
Can't wait for the next one!

OMFC at least she is okay.
who is the one that saved her.
matt and nyx are getting closer.
can´t wait for more soon!!

I LOVE THIS STORY

I'm wondering where you got the idea of this story from
Reminds me quite a lot of the anime Elfen Lied..

yey you updated
hope nyxan is fine maybe she is still a little unstable about her powers.
update soon i know i hhave being bthering you so much but i cant help it when your story is great. i mean it :)

this is so good!!

I'm so sorry that this comment is way overdue, but hey never late then never, I guess?

I really wanna find out what's gonna happen to Nyx and the people who are hunting after her. What's gonna happen next in this epic tale?

but, for now I'm just happy that everything worked out in the Val situation and that there are no hard feelings between anyone.

Please keep it up, this story is getting so good

uhhhhhh
I shiver with delight!
I do with every chapter but today it is an extra delicious shiver.
I shall wait, and I will pretend to do so patiently cuz I have no choice.
Roar