On To The Next One. - Comments

Hello[: Thanks for getting it in on time.
I loved the layout and character pictures, kudos for that :D
I believe the story matched your song well and I enjoyed reading this.
It was a little short and seemed rushed, also, you started writing this in 2nd person, as though it where a letter, then it changed into 1st person from Phoneix's POV (or whatever the people are....) That was a little confused.
I didn't see any major spelling or grammar issues, though, so thats good.

Good Luck

Poor Phoenix!! Good for him though!
Kick that Quinn to the curb!
I liked this!
It was good :)

wow i realyy cant type! *suBscribes* oh and PAGE CLAIM!

*sunscribes* Yay! its up! *does retarded happy dance*