I love this story more and more. I can't believe the mystery man was Iker. That's a shocker and poor Fernando didn't know how she felt about what he called her. I think any girl would be upset when you like a guy and they keep calling you friend or even make out with you and it just sends even more confusing signals. Can't wait for the next one girlie.
and there was me about to get on and moan at you to update ;) ahh i love the fact that im irish .. i just LOVE the accent !! i cant wait for the next one !
WHAT A CLIFFHANGER! I am "patiently" awaiting the next story. Haha. :) I was kind of shocked how mad Alessandra got when Fernando called her friend, especially because of his situation, but I realized I know a lot of girls who would act that way. I also love the different POVs. It's a great story and I hope you feel better. :)
Wow, it kinda wasn't a shock since I know Alex would probably wouldn't cheat on Stevie. But how Alessandra exited the car and was mad that he would always think of her as a friend or whatever she just moved on. Poor Fernando after thinking about it so much and coming up with a resolution she's having sex with someone else already. Aless didn't want to wait around since she never would have known if he would ever come around and date or love again since Olalla. It would be great if I was in the story, but it's not my choice. lol can't wait for the next one
Lol craziness rocks though! Without craziness there isn't a lot of imagination. I comment cuz I love ur story and it's okay I love puttin up with u. Lol I don't expect for u to update everyday. Alex is a magician jus popping out of no where at random places. First for Stevie now alessandra. Lol classic I do that too and people r freaked out how quite I am when I enter a room or facility. Lol they say I'm a ghost when I'm walking next to someone since I switch from one side to the next quitely and I really don't notice that I do it. Lol hope u get better. Everyone is getting sick nowadays especially the writers.
I love your story. I know school is dragging you down. It's doing the same with me. Its so stressful for me since I have a paper,presentation and exam due all the same day. Very crazy. I then will breath normal once it's wednesday. Lol Alessandras story is just so sad and heart felt. I never knew her story was so heavy. So anything tragic could trigger that mental disease. Will ales get it inthw near future? That would be interesting is she did since I rarely read a story where the oc has a mental problem usually those are in the supernatural catergory. Lol can't wait for the netxt chapter and much love and good luck with school
Dude. I like this story a lot. Surprisingly. It's a good thing. I mean they way that they just did it was super intense, but it was good. :D keep writing.
I knew something like that would happen. I mean when two people are mourning over their loss they have something similiar and what do they do to forget the pain... sleep with each other. I love it, so sad though that he couldn't say their names. lol stevies rant and accurate number of how many times he tried to contact her was hilarious. can't wait for the next one