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  • bloodravyn

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    sad
    September 4th, 2011 at 06:47am
  • shaylove

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    Aww :(( pooooorrrr Emily :( <333 this :)
    January 16th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • shaylove

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    I loooove itt :D lol i was just thinking about this story the other day and i was like 'did they delete it :(' but i'm glad you didn't!
    January 16th, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • shaylove

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    I am soooo subscribing!!! I need updates!!! And wouldn't Carlisle kissing Emily make him a pedophile? Just wonderin' ;-)
    September 29th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Liar Liar

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    nother update? please
    September 28th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • Liar Liar

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    please update soon.
    September 26th, 2010 at 07:16pm
  • trinkeyk

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    Please update!I like it a lot(:
    September 22nd, 2010 at 05:17am
  • Liar Liar

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    awesome update soon
    September 21st, 2010 at 12:31am
  • Art_Flavor

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    update plz
    September 17th, 2010 at 09:15pm
  • xxbrittxxx

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    I really love this story... Those poor girls my heart was hearting for them i felt like crying their thoughts were so sad... and you did a really good job at incorporating the Cullen family in there. Cant wait to see what Dr. Cullen has to say. Update soon :D
    September 16th, 2010 at 04:23am
  • tears of a lullaby

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    Ohh Dr. Cullen! Of course his cool hands relaxed her right away haha. Uggg that mother needs to get slapped like ASAP. i hate her!!! I'm scared for Shelby in the next coming chapter.
    September 12th, 2010 at 01:36am
  • GetOnYourKneesKid

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    I really like how this story is going so far : ]
    Update soon!
    September 11th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • NiallAndThePotatoes

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    Love it girls! Keep up the amazing work :D
    You're doing really well with this and three chapters already! [:
    It's quite realistic and interesting; I can't wait for more. :D
    Good luck and amazing job!

    Love ya Danger! <3

    --Alias
    September 10th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • tears of a lullaby

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    Love ya em! I love how its Twilight based, in Forks Washington and raining. It's such a different twist that the characters have problems with family and abuse. I like how you feel something when reading this. It's so realistic too. I like how the 2nd writer is the older sister role, having to take care of her little sis. Can't wait to read more from both of you!!!
    September 9th, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • NiallAndThePotatoes

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    Rawr. :] First comment! YAAAAY!
    Anyways, even for just the first chapter...I think you both have something that's going to turn into something really amazing! [: Kind of pulls on the heartstrings and takes actual problems and brings them into something people can relate to.
    Great job girls!
    Love you Danger! <3

    --Alias <3
    :P
    September 9th, 2010 at 04:31am