I really love this story... Those poor girls my heart was hearting for them i felt like crying their thoughts were so sad... and you did a really good job at incorporating the Cullen family in there. Cant wait to see what Dr. Cullen has to say. Update soon :D
Ohh Dr. Cullen! Of course his cool hands relaxed her right away haha. Uggg that mother needs to get slapped like ASAP. i hate her!!! I'm scared for Shelby in the next coming chapter.
Love it girls! Keep up the amazing work :D You're doing really well with this and three chapters already! [: It's quite realistic and interesting; I can't wait for more. :D Good luck and amazing job!
Love ya em! I love how its Twilight based, in Forks Washington and raining. It's such a different twist that the characters have problems with family and abuse. I like how you feel something when reading this. It's so realistic too. I like how the 2nd writer is the older sister role, having to take care of her little sis. Can't wait to read more from both of you!!!
Rawr. :] First comment! YAAAAY! Anyways, even for just the first chapter...I think you both have something that's going to turn into something really amazing! [: Kind of pulls on the heartstrings and takes actual problems and brings them into something people can relate to. Great job girls! Love you Danger! <3