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you broke my heart when her father came and took her away! but it's a fucking good story and I beg of you not to stop

:)

awh more tamsin :c her father is very evil! they should be together again sdlfjsdklfjsdfkl
i wonder what tom has planned to get them together, urgh. you have to update again soon okay? this was greeeeat! i'm so excited to know what happens :D

OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! TAMSIN'S PAPI NEEDS TO STOP BEING A DICKWAD >:(
he made me an angry person!
all oli wants is a little lovin'! and this big, rowdy guy, comin in all broady, has to go an fuck that up >:(
tamsin's papi's gon' get it from celina! >:(

..you made me an emotional person because i love your story too much.
hahahah<333 please update soonnnn! :D

I announced to my parents that if I ever run away to England to stay with a boy named Oli Sykes, they're not allowed to show up and ruin it.

bout time slack ass :p okay okay i know i cant talk. We've been delighted with Croup for the past week, not fun, i can tell you. But I'm getting there! And thats what counts :D

Now onto your story.

Nooooooo! He can't take her! What a bastard. Oli is gonna follow her, isnt he? Huh? Huh?

Good job sweetie!

That was fuckin' intense, that was.
My heart was pounding and I was like "No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no. She can't leave. No no NO!"
Haha.
Anyway.
That was an amazing chapter.
Another soon?

UGH OH MY GOD.
This chapter's my definite favorite.
ME CREYS, OKAY?
T_T this was so sad!
The ending was alksdfjasdkljf I CAN'T EVEN.
._.
Her dad needs to gfto.
JUST SAYING.
>.>
Update soon?

oh my gosh! that was so upsetting D: you did such a good job because i am feeling all upset about them having to leave each other! oooh so much drama as well! urgh, you have to update soon because they have to be together again. its not fair that she got pulled away from him, if i was her i'd just run away again at the airport or something haha. urgh, this was brilliant! update again soon :D

Oh my.
Not good.
More soon?
I hope.

wowzer! Your pumping these chapters out! I cannot wait to see who it was at the door. Ex boyfriend? Ohhhhhhhhh!

that must be her dad or her brother? oh my oh my. things are going to get messy and so much drama! i love drama, espeically when it comes to writing it :D
can't wait to find out what happens next so you better get cracking cause cliff hangers are nasty things in stories haha. but this was brilliant!

O.O
SHIT GOT REAL.
and I heart soapy, so props to her.
I wonder if it's Tasmin's dad?
dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnn

O.O
SHIT GOT REAL.
and I heart soapy, so props to her.
I wonder if it's Tasmin's dad?
dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnn

this was a great chapter! :D
oooh she didn't seem so happy about the modeling thing :b
can't wait for the next chapter, update again soon!

:)

quite steamy ahah :]
but i love the plot and i cannot wait for more.

Hey hey hey.
So, I'm sorry I didn't comment right when this chapter came out.
STEAMY, HUH?
Yepyep. :3
Keep up the nice work, lovey. :D

that was very steamy indeed, haha. i think you did that very tastefully, not tacky at all! there are loads of books with sex scenes in them, so no need to be blushing or anything, haha. update again soon! i wanna know what happens between them, they seem all lovely dovey now but you never know what might happen :D

Bow-chickka-wow-wow!
Great chapter. Not too smutty, just enough to get the picture. I love the new layout, makes it easier to read. And the pic is pretty cute!
Only thing, some spelling errors. Only one I can remember is at the start you were writing about them going back to Oli's flat and it said 'fat'. There was another one but I can't remember right now.
All in all I loved it. And now you have inspired me to get mine out.