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easygoingellie (100)

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i love it already :D

October 22nd, 2010 at 03:25am

kelly yells love. (100)

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I like this a lot :)
Update soon.

October 21st, 2010 at 08:35pm

Norma J (100)

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So far I like it!
Update soon!
XD

October 21st, 2010 at 03:41am

celinasmile (100)

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i really like this :) i like the way you wrote from different points of views but yet it was still the same point of view--like the narration was still third. i love a lot of stories but it bothers me sooo much when people switch views in first person -____- anyway, great start! :) update soon please! :D

October 21st, 2010 at 01:32am

TheRockshowChick (100)

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Hey, the start of the story is really good & i hope that it keeps going on that way (: I love it how you used facts with the Australian tour how Bring Me The Horizon are doing right now. Keep it up

Madddisonnna <3

September 9th, 2010 at 11:25am