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  • bloodravyn

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    will you please update this again, soon?
    i just discovered it and am loving it, then it ran out of chappies
    August 29th, 2012 at 11:36am
  • Alice..

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    Love it!
    Oh my gosh. I can't wait to see how Edward and Mila go and the drama it will cause!
    Update soon please!!!!!!!
    August 10th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • bapple

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    love the story already :) can't wait for the relationships to grow!
    Update soon please! :D
    June 26th, 2011 at 06:30am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Sucks to be Edward cause when Bella finds out wat he's really doing she's gonna be pissed
    June 25th, 2011 at 01:29pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    it's really good!!! and going to end very badly, hahaha. I love the plot- and I cant wait to see how it goes. since kari's co-writing though, I'm sure it'll be amaaazing~ and whoever she chose to write with
    June 7th, 2011 at 07:40am
  • fabulous_39

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    great update. can't wait for the next one :D
    December 19th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Ew, Edward's icky, why would she want him? Renesmee's so cute in my head though.
    December 19th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • avenging angel

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    D= awesome update!!!:)
    December 16th, 2010 at 08:35pm
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    Emmett must pay!
    November 29th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Nice update. Emmett's smexiful and all, but god damn he deserved that!
    November 29th, 2010 at 10:37pm
  • avenging angel

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    O: looks like someones in trouble!!:) nice update hope u write more soon!
    November 29th, 2010 at 09:18pm
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Good story, all together, though I've never liked the concept of sparkly vampires. My vampires burn.
    October 25th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Yay the two girls have meet!
    October 25th, 2010 at 12:54am
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Hm, normally I don't subscribe to a Twilight fan-fiction type story, but this one has caught my interest because not many people write about the 1900's. Let's see where this goes.
    October 11th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • hiboux

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    I really like this story so far
    I think it's going to be very interesting
    More, more more!
    October 10th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • HarlequinValentine

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    Can you put up a picture of Darrell? I really want to know what he looks like!
    October 10th, 2010 at 04:38pm
  • TragicMistake.

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    Most frustrations were let out through the killing of those punishable like murderers, rapists, molesters and many other horrid humans but none filled the void in her now empty heart.
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    Humans should be able to do that... \: those bad people, deserve nothing.

    I love this story, update soon ^.^ sub'd !
    October 9th, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Awesome update.

    I can't wait when the two girls meet.
    October 9th, 2010 at 02:42pm
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Interesting story.
    October 1st, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • AcidStamps

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    That was a rad first chapter.
    Cant wait to read more :)
    September 22nd, 2010 at 01:29am
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