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Dear lord this was creepy, in an amazingly way :D
The photo freaked me out, for serious.
And it was...just creepy? But the creepy kind of way, y'know?
I can't explain it xD
But dude, this was amazingg <3

The picture made me shudder. Ouu
As I read this, my fingers would twitch.
Don't worry, its good thing.
I love stories like these that get that sort of reaction out of me!
Great job<3

Whoa, that was totally amazing!

I loved stuff like this!

It was amazing with just the right amount of detail; could use more emotion I guess but I loved it!!! <3

I liked this.
It was creepy and weird and all too amazing.
Great job. (':

The picture really was scary, but I liked it and it fit with the story.

It was.... to the point, and the last line made me breathless, I don't know why, it was just all so powerful. I think you did a majorly great job on this and I enjoyed reading it.

Well done!

I find this so... Gah!

Okay, I'll be honest. When I read it, I really took it in two aspects. One was the literal one and the second one had a deeper meaning. It seemed as if it was all sort of symbolistic, y'know. With the main character being so deeply hurt by a man (or a love) that she feels as if he killed her.

I love stories where the reader can do that - see things in the story from several deeper perspectives.

I think you did a great job on this :)

The banner fits it perfectly.
It was shocking, but nicely written :)

I like the layout, and the picture is so morbid but curious. It makes me think a lot of things.

I am thoroughly impressed. It was so morbid and frightening, especially to hear it from the victims point of view but it was brilliant. It flowed nicely except for a few sentences, but you did fine. You also did a good job at achieving exactly one hundred words, not many can do that so congratulations mate.

I like to be left wondering about background details and you did a good job on that haha. I really want to know the background to this story like who would want to kill her? Why would they want to? Was it her boyfriend or jealous sister/bestfriend. It’s like a cliffhanger, which is good.

I think you brought the picture to life and told a wonderful story that seems like it could also be good for campfires haha.

Wow.

I...don't know what to say. I'm kinda sorta speachless.

Great job, darlz.

I'm a little shaken by that, probably because of the picture, but I liked it! I like all your drabbles. It was really great. Why would he want to cut her like that? Or at all? >_<