Assassin - Comments

I was right....I cried like a baby. I still have the sniffles, but I think I'm going to make it. lol.

I almost lost it when the cops were coming and Clive refused to run. I'm so glad that Heather talked him into leaving. Yeah, they were separated for two years, but it would have been a lot longer if he had went to jail.

The ending was just...perfect! They're together, they got to have a real wedding, and it was just so....perfect! Best story ever, hun :)

Oww hun, thank you so much for your support. You are the sweetest girl! :) Thank you, really!

I know, I will cry too. I'm still gathering strength to write it down. It had to end perfectly.

This has been one crazy ride, hun. I loved reading and getting caught up on all of this. From Clive and Heather finally getting together, Heather learning the truth, wanting to kick that Jackson dude's ass, the whole Francesca thing, the kidnapping thing, Clarisse....it's all just been so amazing. You're the best, hun!

I will cry like a baby when this story is over. I can't believe there's only one chapter left...

The update was amazing, hun!!! I love how comfortable Heather and Clive are together. It's like they were made for each other, you know? I'm worried about what Hallway's going to do...I have the feeling he's gonna send someone else after them. And is Clive gonna tell Heather the truth?

I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter :)

I loved getting caught up on this story!! Poor Heather just can't seem to catch a break, can she? And I love how Clive is always swooping in to save the day. I'm a hopeless romantic, so that made me smile :)

Hmm, I'm worried about how Heather's going to react when Clive tells her the whole truth, if he does. And I'm kinda scared that Hallway is going to hire someone else to "take her out."

This story is amazing, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Great update! I sense trouble in both their futures! Can' t wait to find out what you have planned for them next.

I really like Heather. She just seems so sweet and trusting, and I wanna hurt the asshole who hurt her. But...Clive was there to save the day! And I'm pretty sure it was him. And you're right, he's still good looking with the glasses on ;)

The update was great, and I can't wait for the next one!

Finally read the update. Can't wait for the next one. Keep it up

This sounds interesting. I'll definately be waiting for the next update

I love it already, hun!!! I'm gonna subscribe as soon as I get done with this comment. It sounds interesting and very original. I've never read a Clive story before. You know, you're really good at making me read firsts. Thanks to you I read my first Jared story, first Pattinson story, and now my first Clive story!

And I was thinking, hun, that if you ever needed someone to edit for you, I'd be happy to help out. I can't wait to see what happens next!