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The layout itself was awesome. It went really well with the story. The only thing I thought was that the black background kind of...took away from it. But that's just me. :)
...different shades of blue could be seen everywhere. Electric blue. Sea blue. Sky blue.
That is a really good line. I love it. <3
I loved the whole chapter. I mean, it's really realistic. A lot of people can relate to it.
Your descriptions were wonderful.
Over all, great story. <3

Beautiful/brilliant/lovely/stunning/wow.
The layout was simple, and it went with the concept of this story.
I can relate to Ginger in someways, I'm sure a lot of us can.
And because you portrayed what it feels like to be empty, I envy you.
You described in such simplest terms, but in such a beautiful way.

Oh, wow..

That numb nothingness feelings is so familiar to me that I found myself feeling as Ginger was. I know who she feels and how she's missing something but she isn't sure what it is, or even if she's really missing it. This was amazing, really.

I used to feel like this. Feeling no change, no happy or sad. It's like being on a straight line with nowhere else to go.
I like the part where she describes the shades of blue, and how they don't affect her, though she does appreciate the scene. It's like seeing a scene, but not being able feeling the atmosphere around you.

Oh my. That was beautiful. That was amazing.

The feeling you describe is something I can relate to, and you really made me feel for Ginger.
Your description = brilliance.

This was great.

Oh, I really liked this.