I actually totally love this! It's very well written without any grammer or spelling mistakes as well! I love the story and how everything did change because that's real! I love how you made it relatable. I love the last sentance about the wax mesuem and everything. I think it was very well written and beautiful in a tragic way :)
I actually totally love this! It's very well written without any grammer or spelling mistakes as well! I love the story and how everything did change because that's real! I love how you made it relatable. I love the last sentance about the wax mesuem and everything. I think it was very well written and beautiful in a tragic way :)
-Emily