Love Or Lust. - Comments

I'm sorry its taken me so long to start judging the entrees, but thank you so much for being patient! This was super cute and well written, your depiction of Adrian was particularly vivid. The entire thing would've made a great full-length story, so if you ever find yourself suffering writers block I fully suggest building upon this. That isn't to say that you didn't capture the plot awesomely in a one-shot, because you most certainly did.

Once again, thanks for entering! I'll message you with the results shortly :)

I loved this :)

So cute :) I love that John was finally just like 'whatever, fuck you.' I was picturing him all angry and bent out of shape and just.. yum. Thanks for the mental imagery, love.