I love the background, and I'm intrigued by where you're going to lead this story. It seems very interesting so far, can't wait to read more! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
woot first chapter was very intresting i liked the hole sunset thing well i love sunsets and haha Alex of course next cams first chappy was amazing you allways know a storys going to be good when theres a fight scene in the first chapter i really liked it and four guys huh wonder where the inspiration for that came from and finnaly jens new chappy again with Alex sounding familer it was in enjoyable chapter but so far it sounds like your just setting cameron up for amazing chapters and Cliffhanger! cant wait to read the next chappy Cam im going to sub