That was absolutely amazing... truly tragic but also very beautifully written. I simply adored the writing style you used, which dragged me in from the very beginning with phrases which catch the readers attention such as "Don't you think?" which makes it seem very personal and is a wonderful technique =) The whole plot was realistic and believable which is always a marvelous thing and the ending was just perfect for the dark atmosphere of the whole thing. I adored it, well done ^_^
Edit: I just noticed you're from my neck of the woods! I live in Port Talbot, S.Wales so uuh yeah =D