He Has Her - Comments

This piece is wonderful and powerful, and like rowen. said, usually dialogue in drabbles doesn't work yet I think it's that which made the piece. I really liked the running metaphor, and it was something I could relate to. Great job.

I never really see dialogues in drabbles, or actual characters. And normally when I do see or read a drabble with dialogues, they're really shitty and stupid. They never make any sense.
But this one was really nice. It really has a point of where it's going. I like it.

I have never read a story on Mibba that touched this subject. I was so drawn in, because I've been asked this question. It just made the drabble 10 times more personal, in a way. Not only that, but I really like Alex's way of talking about her old self in third person. It makes it all more real. And even if her explanation was short and to the point, it explained something so complicated.

♥ Truly liked this.

It looks really good!
Cant wait for the next chapter :)